Dear all,
Please refer to the question paper for composition writing and
work on question 1 - Picture 1 to 4 (Picture composition)
I have provided you with some helping words and phrases below for picture 2 to 4 to enhance your writing. As for picture 1, you might want to start your story with a dialogue perhaps.
Try to make sure that the climate of the story lies in picture 3 and 4.
You will submit your finished writing via the "comment" function.
Please also try to read through your friends' writings so as to learn from one another.
Take note... you have to write the whole story!!!!!
Have fun!
Helping words and phrases
Picture 2
- Gave the ball a mighty kick
- Sent the ball straight to the road
- He dashed across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles
Picture 3
- So engrossed in retrieving the ball that …
- hits the brakes hard and the car came screeching to a halt
Picture 4
- The powerful impact smashed the glass windows into smithereens…
- sent him violently onto the ground
- bleeding profusely
- blood was still oozing out from the cut on his wrist
- His shirt was caked with filth and blood
- feeling nauseated and dizzy from the impact.
- unconscious
- traumatized by the incident…
- rooted to the ground
- could not believe what had just happened
- quickly summoned the ambulance with his mobile phone
- has cause a terrible traffic jam
- With only seconds to spare, …
- Moments later, …
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-Picture 2
Jim gave the ball a mighty kick and sent the ball straight to the road. He dashed across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles. He ran and ran and suddenly his friends heard a loud “Bang”.
Picture 2
Peter gave his soccer ball a mighty kick. The kick sent the ball straight to the road. Peter did not see the oncoming car and just dashed across the road and picked his soccer ball. Suddenly, his soccer friends heard a loud “ Bang ”.
Fungru
Yellow Group
Picture 2
Colin gave his ball a mighty and he sent the ball straight to the road.He dashed across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles.Suddenly, all his soccer friends heard a loud " Bang ".
White Group
Picture 2
Suddenly, Tim accidentally kicked the football to the road! "Oh! Such a mighty kick!" exclaimed one of his friend, Tony. As Tommy went to pick up the ball, a honking sound from a car pierced through the air.
Ren MoLiu
Red[tiger]
Oh sorry. The Tommy is actually "Tim"... ... ... .
Mr Ang, I do not know how to write the dialogue to start my compo.
Picture 3
Colin was too engrossed in retrieving the ball that he got knock by the car.
I mean...
Picture 3
Colin was too engrossed in retrieving the ball that he got knock by the car.The driver heats the brake hard and the car came sreeching to a halt.
Picture 2
Zachery gave the ball a mighty kick and off it went, into the middle of the road."Sorry guys,I kick the ball too hard.I will take the ball back."Zachery said, and he dashed into the road without watching out for any vehicles.
Soo Xuan
Picture 4
The powerful impact smashed the glass window into smithereens and sent Colin violently onto the ground.He was bleeding profusely on the ground, blood was still oozing out from the cut on his wrist.His shirt was caked with filth and blood.All his soccer friends could not believe what had just happened.With only seconds to spare, all his soccer friends summoned the ambulance with one of Colin's soccer friend's mobile phone.Moments later, the ambulance came and quick as a flash sent Colin to the hospital.
Picture 3
Zachery was so engrossed in retrieving the ball that he did not see a car rushing towards him.
The car hits the brakes hard and the car came screeching to a halt when Zachery was about to touch the ball.
Soo Xuan
Picture1
Aha!There are the Three boys playing football.Kicking there kicking here,playing very happily Screaming laughing all around them.
Jia Qi
Picture 2
Then...Opps,Andrew accidentally kick the ball out to the road.then he ran to the road to retrived the ball.
Jia Qi
Picture 4
"Bang!"The car sent Zachery violently away and onto the ground.When the friends saw what was happening,they rushed towards Zachery, a few metres away.He was bleeding profusely!Zachery was vomitting and felt dizzy.Suddenly, Zachery fainted, lying on the road unconsciously.Without a second of delay, one of Zacher's friends guickly summoned the ambulance with their mobile phone.With only seconds to spare, they reached the hospital in no time.Zachery's friends called his parents.When Zachery's parents arrived at the hospital,the doctor came out from the emergency room.The doctor said,"That boy is fine now but have to stay here for at least three weeks to recover fast."Zachery had learnt his lessons from that accident after he had recover.
Soo Xuan
Picture 3
Just then a car was coming towards Andrew.The driver saw Andrew and quickly slammed at the brake,but it was too late.The car had bang Andrew!Andrew was bleeding profusely on every part of his body.his friends rush to the road to look at him.Some passers-by saw and immediately dial for the emergency hotline.After a few minutes sirens of the ambulance and the police car were heard.The ambulance bought Andrew away.
Picture 1
"Pass me the ball Farid!" said Ali. Farid and his friends, Ali, Micael and John, were playing a game of football at a park with a nearby road. Ali and Farid wre losing!
Zaheer(26)White Phoenix
Picture 4
Andrew was immediately sent to the Accident and Emergency room.The doctor and nurses performed a surgery on Andrew.When Andrew's Parents received the call from the hospital they immediately came.Lucky for Andrew the surgery is a success,Andrew's parents were relieved that their son is okay.Andrew had to stay 1 month in the Hospital to recover.In conclusion,children should not play near the road.
Pic 2
Ali wanted to make a stand. Then an idea struck him, causing him to run towards Michael and John's goal. He gave a mega-strong kick that could send a car blowing into smithereens!
Zaheer(26)White Phoenix
Pic 3
As the ball rolled along the road, Farid went to pick up the ball. But little did he know that a car was on it's way.
Zaheer(26)White Phoenix
Picture 2
Suddenly, Tommy gave the ball a mighty kick and sent it flying to the roadside. Tommy immediately dash across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles.
Picture 3
Tommy was engross in retrieing the ball and little did he know a car was speeding and the driver did not see Tommy. "BANG!!!!" The driver collided with Tommy. The powerful impact smashed the glass windows into smithereens and sent Tommy violently onto the ground. Tommy lie on the road, while his friends stared at him helplessly. Tommy is unconscious and he is bleeding profusely. Tommy had just cause a terrible traffic jam. One of his friends quickly summonedthe ambulance with his mobile phone.
Picture 4
The ambulance came within minutes and brought Tommy to the hospital. Tommy woke up at the hospital. He wondered why is he at the hospital. He recalled back and remembered he had been hit by a car. Tommy had discharged after a few days and learnt not to dash across the road as it was dangerous.
Sorry forgotten to write my name.
Ryan Heng
Pic 4
Farid was hit. Shortly,he fainted. When he woke up, he found himself in a hospital.His teacher and family were there, suprisingly. His teacher was the one who had hit him.Before his teacher could even apologise, Farid said that he did not want an apology. He was just happy to be alive and talking.
Zaheer(26)White Phoenix
Picture 3
John gave the ball a hard kick, instead of rolling into the goal post, it landed on the road instead. John immediately ran to the road to retrieve the ball, ignoring his friends shouts of warning. He was so engrossed in retrieving the ball that he did not notice a car speeding by.
Yew Kai Xun(yellow)
John gave the ball a mighty kick and sent the ball straight to the road. He dash across the road without looking out for outcoming vehicles. His screamed, it was too late to warn him.
Picture 4
Peep! Peep! The blaring horns of the car reached deep into John's ears. But John was scared stiff. The driver of the car tried to stop the car in time but...BANG!!! The driver could not stop in time. The driver's windscreen was cowered in fresh blood. Someone called the ambulance. Two days later... John was discharged, with a fractured arm. John had learnt his lesson.
Picture 2
John gave the ball a hard kick. It rolled down to the road. Little did he know, a car was speeding by.
Yew Kai Xun
Picture 2
This is the last chance for alex to win.He gave the ball a mighty kick and it sent the ball straight to the road.
Green group
mr ang I dont know how to start with dialouge
kruisetog
Picture 1
Last week, George was playing football with his friends. George were playing with three other friends. They were playing at an area near the road.
By Ern Sheng
piture 2
Andy had got ready for his final chance to score a goal using his last spurt of energy, he kicked ... his friends failed to catch the ball, the ball bounced out to the road.
Picture 2
They were playing a match. They were playing happily, when suddenly, George accidentally kicked the ball onto the road. Without looking there was a oncoming car , he dashed onto the road to get the ball. The driver of the oncoming car could not stopped in time and knocked down George.
picture 3
Andy dashed in the middle of the to pick up the soceer ball without looking out for oncoming vehecles.At that moment, when Andy attempted to retreive the ball a cardriving at breakneck speed srceehed to a halt when he saw Andy but it was too lat, it crashed in to Andy.
Picture 3
George was knocked down and was bledding profusely. The driver of the car immediately called for the ambulance. When the ambulance arrived, George was immediately taken to the hospital.
Mr Ang , I do not know how to start the dialouge for picture 1.
Jerrett Han
“Pass me the ball, Jack!!” Tom shouted loudly at Jack. “Quickly!!!” Jack, Tom, Max and I are playing football at the soccer field near the road. Tom and Jack were about to lose the game.
As Max and I were winning, Tom ran…and ran…and ran and gave the ball a mighty kick. The ball went flying across the sky and landed on the road. Without hesitation, Jack immediately dashed across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles.
The car hits the brakes hard and the car came screeching loudly to a halt. “Bang!!!” Jack was still hurt as the car driver was late for work and was travelling on high speed.
The strong impact sent him violently to the ground. Blood was oozing out profusely from the cut on his wrist. His shirt was caked with filth and blood. The commotion had cause a traffic jam. Moments later, Jack was sent to the hospital. Jack had learnt not to dash across the road as oncoming car may crash onto him.
The moral of the story is never to drive fast and not to dash across the road.
Samuel Leow
[ White Pheonix]
Picture 1
Let me tell you something, always be alert! Oh yes, I forgot to introduce myself; I am Lim Jia Hui you will never believe this. One afternoon, I was playing football with three other friends. We were having a great time.
Lim Jia Hui
( Blue Group )
Picture 4
When the driver got out of the car, Andy was bleeding prousfusly and was unconscious but instead of helping him he abrutly drove off. I hpoe someone knew the licensed number for that car and reported it to the police.
Picture 2
One of us gave a mighty kick and the ball rolled to the roadside. Neither my friends nor did I see any vehicle approaching us. So I went to retrieve ball.
Lim Jia Hui
( Blue Group )
Picture 4
When George's parents heard about the news, they immediately rushed to the hospital. When they got there, they asked the doctor is George ok? The doctor said that he has regain consciousness. George's parents brief a sigh of relieved that their son ok.
Picture 3
Then it began, so I dashed across the road to retrieve the soccer ball. That is when my friends start to warn me, “A CAR IS APPROACHING YOU!!! A CAR IS APPROACHING YOU!!!” Too late!!! The driver tried to brake. “BANG!” my friends heard a deafening sound. The vehicle had knock me down. I was bleeding profusely and also unconscious. The driver quickly informed the ambulance about my current situation.
Lim Jia Hui
( Blue Group )
Picture 4
Soon after, they arrived. They carried me onto a stretcher. And I was brought to the hospital. The doctor examined me and found out that I have a fractured leg. When I came to, I found myself lying in a hospital bed. I am sitting in my wheelchair now. Had I be alert and notice the vehicle approaching me, I would not be sitting in a wheelchair now.
Lim Jia Hui
( Blue Group )
Picture 1
Last week, George was playing football with his friends. George were playing with three other friends. They were playing at an area near the road.
Picture 2
They were playing a match. They were playing happily, when suddenly, George accidentally kicked the ball onto the road. Without looking there was a oncoming car , he dashed onto the road to get the ball. The driver of the oncoming car could not stopped in time and knocked down George.
Picture 3
George was knocked down and was bleeding profusely. The driver of the car immediately called for the ambulance. When the ambulance arrived, George was immediately taken to the hospital.
Picture 4
When George's parents heard about the news, they immediately rushed to the hospital. When they got there, they asked the doctor is George ok? The doctor said that he has regain consciousness. George's parents brief a sigh of relieved that their son ok.
By Ern Sheng
Picture 2
They were playing a soccer match.They were playing when John suddenly,gave the ball a mighty kick.The ball flew up to the sky and bounced onto the road.
Jerrett Han
"Over here Simon" Jack shouted loudly to Simon.Jack,Tom,Timonthy and Shawn were playing football at a soccer field near thier house.Timothy and Simon was about to win the game.
We were playing when Simon gave a mighty kick and the ball rolled to the road.Without hesitation,Timonthy ranto retrieve the ball without looking for the oncoming vehicles.
Picture 1
"Kick the ball to me!" shouted Tom. Tom and his three other friends, John, Ken and Ben were playing football at a field near the main road.
Beatrice Khoo
Picture 2
Suddenly, Tom kicked too hard and sent the ball straight to the road. Tom apologised to his friends and started to dash across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles.
Beatrice Khoo
The driver of the car was speeding and did not notice Timonthy."BANG!!!!"a loud deafening sound was heard.
Picture 3
When John dashed across the road to pick up his ball,he failed to see an oncoming car heading towards him.The driver could not stop in time and it hit John with a loud "Bang!"
Jerrett Han
The driver got off the car and called for the ambulance.Timonthy was bleeding profusely.The children was shocked to see Timonthy bleeding profusely.A few minutes later,the ambulance arrived.Timonthy was rushed to the hospital.All of them went home and waited for news of Timonthy.After a while they heard that Timonthy was fine.
Picture 3
The ball stopped rolling in the middle of the road and Tom bent down to pick it up. He was so engrossed in retrieving the ball that he did not notice a car heading straight towards him. When the driver of the car saw Tom, he hit the brakes hard and the car came screeching to a halt. Unfortunately, he did not brake in time and Tom was knocked down.
Beatrice Khoo
Picture 1
The high sunlit clouds drifted across a clear blue sky. Alif, Omar, Arif and Shafiq are playing soccer after their hard work at school. They break themselves into two different teams. After they have discussed with each other, they decided that Omar and Alif will be as a team whereas Shafiq and Arif will be another team. After starting the match, Alif got control of the ball and decided to move forward to the opposition side. “Here!” shouted Omar. As he is signaling Alif to pass the ball to him.
Sufian Red Group
Picture 2
Weiming gave the ball a mighty kick and sent the ball straight to the road. He dashed across the road without looking out for the oncoming vehicles. Suddenly, his friend heard a loud 'BANG'!
Yan Wen
Red Tiger
Picture 2
But instead, Alif gave the ball a mighty kick thinking that he would score a goal for his team. Unfortunately, he sent the ball straight to the road. Since it was the opposition ball, Arif dashed to the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles.
Sufian Red Group
Picture 3
Arif was so engrossed in retrieving the ball that little did he know that a car was coming towards him. The car hits the brakes hard and the car came screeching to a halt.
Sufian Red Group
Picture 4
Peep! Peep! The blaring horns of the car reached deep into Arif ears. But he was scared stiff. The driver of the car tried to stop the car in time but...BANG!!! Arif was thrust a few metres away .He was bleeding profusely. Shortly, he fainted. When he woke up, he found himself in a hospital. His friends and family were there with his form teacher. The doctor informed that Arif should get enough rest before he will be able to go to school again. Surprisingly, a man whom he did not know, apologies to Arif. Arif’s mother told him that the man is the driver who had knocked him down. Unfortunately, Arif did not want an apology but instead, he apologies everyone for being so careless when he is on the road. He is lucky to be alive.
Sufian Red Group
Picture 1
It was a sunny day in the morning. Four boys Tom, Tommy, went to play football at a neighborhood park for some exercise. There are lots of trees and grass around the edge of the park.
Jasmine woo (37)
White Pheonix
Picture 2
One of the boys Tom suddenly kicked the ball too hard. The ball bounced roadside onto the road.
Jasmine woo(37)
White Pheonix
Phew! Finally done!!! =)
Picture 4
With a loud ‘BANG’! The car collided together with Tom. Tom was bleeding profusely and was unconscious. His friends called the ambulance for help. Luckily there were no minor injuries. Tom learnt that we must look left and right before walking across and not dash across the road.
Jasmine woo(37)
White Pheonix
Picture 1
"Pass the ball to me!" shouted Alex to John. They were playing soccer with their other friends, Zack and Cody. Unfortunately Alex and John were loosing.
Green Group
Picture 3
Without looking, Tom dashed to road to get the ball. A car was driving towards him. The driver swerved very hard to avoid the Tom. But it was too late.
Picture 4
The driver came out of the car and and called the ambalance immediately.John was bleeding profusely.John's shirt was caked with filth and blood.Moments later,the ambalance arrived and John was quickly sent to the hospital.When John's parents heard the news,they quickly rushed to the hospital.When they reached there,they asked the doctor how's John.The dctor said that he had regained consciousness.They thanked the doctor for saving John's life.
Jerrett Han
Picture 3
"I will take the ball" told Alex.He dashed across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles. Little did he know that a car was coming towards him.
Green Group
Picture 4
The powerful impact smashed the glass windows into smithereens and sent the pieces of cut glass onto Tom. The pieces of glass made a deep cut on Tom's wrist and blood was oozing out from it. The driver's shirt was caked with filth and blood caused by the broken pieces of glass. Upon hearing the screeching sounds of the car, Tom's friends turned towards the direction of the sound and could not believe what had just happened. Ben quickly whipped out his mobile phone and summoned the ambulance. Moments later, wails of sirens could be heard. Paramedics placed Tom and the driver each on a stretcher and the ambulance sped off.
From that day onwards, Tom never played near the road again.
It was a picturesque morning as the sun proudly beamed its rays of sunshine down upon us.
“Why don’t we play soccer?” exclaimed Belvan.
“Soccer sounds fun, which means this is a set up!”, Jack shouted excitedly.
Arul, Jack, Belvan and I were playing soccer. We were playing with obvious glee, at the field. When we kicked soccer, it was morning. There were no vehicles and people walking around.
We played until we did not notice any oncoming cars. Arul accidentally kicked the ball so hard that Jack had to catch the ball for him. We did noticed that there was an oncoming vehicle, except Jack. Jack bravely dashed across the road as the ball was still bouncing on the road. We tried to stop Jack from going further. He did not hear us. “Clo…clo…close your eyes!” I exclaimed in a horrifying tone as the car went speeding in a high speed.
The driver tried to swerve his car as fast as possible, and Jack managed to grab the ball back…But it was all too late… Jack had been banged landing on the floor with an unceremonious thud! Jack was bleeding profusely. The driver dialed for the ambulance immediately. Ten minutes later, the ambulance arrived. The paramadics brought Jack to the hospital.
When we reached the hospital, we hurried and let the nurse to give him a check up.
One hour later…
No sign of any thing.
Two hours later…
We were worried.
“I…I…I’ve caused Jack to get hit by the car.” mumbled Arul.
Suddenly, the nurse came out wearing a sad face. We thought it would be a bad news, but it turned out to be a bad news.The nurse said that he is all right, but he has to seat on a wheelchair forever. When Jack came out, Arul kept apologizing profusely. Jack said that he would not anyhow dash across the road We were so glad to hear that sentence said by Jack as he had grown wiser.
Whenever any of our own belongings were to fly onto the road, do not pick it up first and see if there is any car. If our things has been destroyed, it is fine because we still can buy a new one. We should not learn from Jack as he is risking his own life by catching one small ball only. And life is more important than anything. If we do not have life, it means that we would not have anything. We must think twice first and be wise before doing any foolish acts.
The sun shone brightly over Singapore, Ali was unusually happy as he was going to play soccer with his cousin at the park. After getting ready for the soccer match, he dashed down with excitement. He ran to the place where they were going to play. There they were all waiting for him. The park was near the roadside, as Ali knew it was dangerous to play there but he ignored the dangers of playing there. The game went on for hours. Ali who knew this game very well scored ten goals. He was so happy that he could not help thinking that he was the luckiest boy on earth but all that changed when…
Ahmad kicked the ball so hard thinking that Ali, the best player in the game,
could catch the ball but it past his head and landed in the middle of the road. He dashed across the road without looking for any incoming vehicles. In the midst of taking the ball, an incoming vehicle, which was speeding, tried to swerve to the right but it was too late. Ali, who was trying to fight back tears of fear, stared motionless at the approaching danger.
“BANG!” Ali was knocked down. He was now unconscious and lying in a pool of blood caught many passers-by attention. Many passers-by were screaming at the sight of the accident. The driver came out holding his mobile phone. He dialed the numbers for the ambulance with fingers that were trembling.
Within five minutes, sirens of the ambulance could be heard. They took Ali into the ambulance using a stretcher. At the hospital, he regained conscious just to find his parents beside him. They told him what had happened and told him about road safety. It was a painful experienced for Ali.
danial
Picture 1
Last week, after the last day of the examinations, John and his friends were playing football at a park near a road.
Emelyne Khoo
One windy afternoon, John and his friends were playing soccer in a field near the road. John snatched the ball, without using his hand. Then he passed the ball to, Mark, suddenly Jacob, snatched the ball and gave it a mighty kick.
“Whoosh” the ball went straight onto the road. Everyone looked shocked that they can’t move except John. He dashed across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles.
Just then, a car came by and almost knock him down. But as he was about to ran back to the field, another car hit him and drove away.
After an hour, he woke up finding himself on a bed in the hospital. His parents were staring at him waiting for him to wake up. His parents told him not to ran across again. Then he apologize to his parents.From that day onwards, John looked for oncoming vihicles before running across the road.
Blue (Belvan)
John and his friends were having fun kicking the ball, but unfortunately, during one of the passes, John gave the ball a mighty kick and sent the ball straight to the road. Since it was John's mistake, he volunteered to retrieve the ball. John dashed across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles.
Emelyne Khoo
Picture 3
As John was so engrossed in retrieving the ball that he did not notice an oncoming car was heading his way. When the driver saw John, he hit the brakes hard and the car came screeching to a halt. But it was too late.
Emelyne Khoo
Picture 1
School ended typically that day.Aaron burst out of the school gates and felt so energised.The sun rays shone brightly and it was a brilliant day for a game of soccer.He fished out his mobile phone and started calling his best mates.Within minutes,they were on their way to a secluded area in their neighbourhood.When they arrived,without further ado,they engaged themselves in a game of soccer.
Asma Afiqah (yellow)
Picture 4
The powerful impact smashed the glass windows into smithereens and sent John violently onto the ground. John was bleeding profusely. His shirt was caked with filth and blood. Traumatized by the incident, John's friends stayed rooted to the ground. Fortunately, one of his friends had a mobile phone and quickly used it to summon for the ambulance. Moments later, the ambulance arrived and the paramedics attended to John and checked with the driver who was slightly injured. As John's injuries were serious, the paramedics wasted no time and quickly sent John to the nearest hospital.
Luckily John survived the horrible accident, though he walks with a slight limp. Until today, John and his friends vowed never to play football near the road again.
Emelyne Khoo
Sorry, I forgot Picture 2 in one of my comments.
Picture 2
As Aaron wanted to flaunt his soccer skills,he accidently kicked the ball too hard and it bounced onto the road.Without thinking twice,Aaron chased the ball to retrieve it.He did not notice an oncoming vehicle.
Asma Afiqah
Picture 4
The powerful impact smashed the glass windows into smithereens and that sent Alex violently onto the ground. He was bleeding profusely and had caused his shirt caked with filth and blood. One of his friends quickly summoned the civil defence with his mobile phone. Moments later, the civil defence arrived. Two paramedics came down from an ambulance brought out a stretcher and carried Alex and put him on a strecther. He was sent to the hospital immediately. John called Alex parents and they could not believe what had just happened. Upon hearing the news his parents rushed to the hostipal. They were happy to see that their child was conscious even though he was injured. He was treated in the hospital for one month. After he was discharged, he learnt a lesson not to dashed across the road without looking out for oncoming vehicles.
Green Group
In a split second,all went black.Aaron heard the screeching of wheels as the driver slammed the brakes to avoid hitting him.But it was to late.The impact threw him several metres away from the scene.Aaron lay there lifeless, legs and arms sprawled on the ground like a rag doll.Aaron was surrounded by a pool of crimson blood.His friends stood motionless looking at the state he was in.Without hesitation,the driver summoned an ambulance.Within minutes, the ambulance arrived.The paramedics placed him on a stretcher and then into the ambulance.
Asma Afiqah Pic 3
Picture 1
One fine afternoon,Zachery decided to play soccer with his friends.They met up in a field nearby.They played and each of them took turns to kick the ball to everyone.
Soo Xuan
Picture (1)
//It was a weekend. The sky was overwhelmed by crimson and amber-tinted clouds. Tom decided to meet the other three of his neighbours to play football at the field which is nearby their house. They are Thomas, Tony and Tim. THey are playing joyfully.
MoLiu
Picture (2)
//Suddenly, Thomas accidentally kicked the ball too hardly and the ball bounced onto the road. "It's such a mighty kick!"exclaimed Tom. Without looking, Thomas dashed fowardd to the road and pick up the ball.
Ren MoLiu
Picture 3 and 4
//Unfortunately, as the driver in the car did not respond quickly, Thomas has been knocked down. Within seconds, Thomas laid down uncounciously with blood oozing out from his body.
//His friends by the road side looked at him worriedly. Panic engulf them. Immediately, a crowd was formed. One of the crowd dialled the ambulance. Within minutes, the ambulance arrived. As this was an emergency, the driver and Thomas was brought to the nearest hospital.After a short period of time, something fortunate happened.
Mr Ang, can I continue later becuse my mother ask me to get off.
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